Some nice images there! I'd just shorten up the top of the intro a bit. 15 sec is a long time to get to the first image. I like to skip a few bars of music to get to the fuller stuff, just not too soon. It seems a bit too long until we are into the "action". I'm a professional film and tv editor by the way. I do this 10hrs a day.
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