Head lamps are wrong, if the bigger par was in the middle, that would work with a little sharper nose. As an over all, It's just too much work. There is much to see, but nothing to focus on entirely. This would be a beauty with no comparison, if someone would just take the pen off the designers hand a few minutes before the shading is done. The crucial lines are correct, but then there should be a pause in there somewhere. You just can not draw and draw and draw and still hold the attention.
As a disclaimer I offer this yet again: I own a Jack Russell.
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